You presented yourself and your product well in this video. I know it is sometimes hard to put yourself in front of a camera and give an impromptu presentation. I struggled with my own elevator pitch. However, you seem to have your ideas gathered well as far as the product you are presenting, and seem to be marketing it to a wide range of customers. I think that is a huge positive, and it is good that you are not just targeting pet owners. I think you could have covered a bit more as to WHY you think customers should invest in this product, and how you plan to market this product to be profitable. Overall, good work!
I love how you started your elevator pitch with a question. I feel like that is a good way to grab the audience and make sure they are listening to what you are saying. The Secoozie, (however you spell it) is a great idea and I loved how you explained what exactly the product is, because if you didn't then people wouldn't really have an idea of what your opportunity belief is. I think one thing you could have improved on is including your target audience in the elevator pitch so the audience knows exactly who you are trying to sell to.
Max, Great elevator pitch! I like how you began with a question, discussed the negative things that come with having your cup spilling all the time and delivered a solution with a catchy name! I think this would be a great seller in stores because everyone carries a cup on a daily basis and could really benefit from the suction cup idea in order to avoid any future spills.
You presented yourself and your product well in this video. I know it is sometimes hard to put yourself in front of a camera and give an impromptu presentation. I struggled with my own elevator pitch. However, you seem to have your ideas gathered well as far as the product you are presenting, and seem to be marketing it to a wide range of customers. I think that is a huge positive, and it is good that you are not just targeting pet owners. I think you could have covered a bit more as to WHY you think customers should invest in this product, and how you plan to market this product to be profitable. Overall, good work!
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ReplyDeleteI love how you started your elevator pitch with a question. I feel like that is a good way to grab the audience and make sure they are listening to what you are saying. The Secoozie, (however you spell it) is a great idea and I loved how you explained what exactly the product is, because if you didn't then people wouldn't really have an idea of what your opportunity belief is. I think one thing you could have improved on is including your target audience in the elevator pitch so the audience knows exactly who you are trying to sell to.
Max,
ReplyDeleteGreat elevator pitch! I like how you began with a question, discussed the negative things that come with having your cup spilling all the time and delivered a solution with a catchy name! I think this would be a great seller in stores because everyone carries a cup on a daily basis and could really benefit from the suction cup idea in order to avoid any future spills.