In this video, I tried to focus more on my tone and tried to say ideas in a better order. I also attempted to use my hands more as I felt this conveyed more enthusiasm.
Max, You convey the ideas of the product well, and even explain how the product should be used. You make it very clear how the product works. You do need to explain more about why customers should buy the product and how you plan to market the product for a profit. Part of your pitch should be dedicated to how you plan to sell/market the product and why you think it will make money. Great explanation, but give us a little bit more substance. You have plenty of time left in your pitch to add a little bit more!
dear maxwell, you have finely tuned this elevator pitch. i believe you were very confident in your product and its ability to function in the toughest conditions. furthermore, i encourage your consumer analysis by advertising to the 'survivor' consumer who adventures and has pets. i cant wait to buy your product. great job!
tone is a very important aspect in making an elevator pitch. In the way you speak it really sounds like you know what you are talking and really care about your product. Another thing that differentiated this elevator pitch from your other ones is that you really have a good and smart plan for the future of your product and the path you want to take.
Max,
ReplyDeleteYou convey the ideas of the product well, and even explain how the product should be used. You make it very clear how the product works. You do need to explain more about why customers should buy the product and how you plan to market the product for a profit. Part of your pitch should be dedicated to how you plan to sell/market the product and why you think it will make money. Great explanation, but give us a little bit more substance. You have plenty of time left in your pitch to add a little bit more!
dear maxwell,
ReplyDeleteyou have finely tuned this elevator pitch. i believe you were very confident in your product and its ability to function in the toughest conditions. furthermore, i encourage your consumer analysis by advertising to the 'survivor' consumer who adventures and has pets. i cant wait to buy your product. great job!
max,
ReplyDeletetone is a very important aspect in making an elevator pitch. In the way you speak it really sounds like you know what you are talking and really care about your product. Another thing that differentiated this elevator pitch from your other ones is that you really have a good and smart plan for the future of your product and the path you want to take.